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Reviews For: The Colors of my Death

America's Rockstar
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseI loved that you used angst in it, and how you made me feel depressed.
I would suggest though to use more colors because I wish it would never end! So just more, more, more!
Amazing!
Eadoin Flannery
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abusei thought it was very beautiful. Captures a lot of emotion.
Tikklz
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was really unique. I loved the approach of using the colors. It gave the poem much more visual appeal. The only one that doesn't seem to quite match up is green. Maybe tweak that a bit, see if you can come up with a clearer connection between the relationship and that color?
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