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| America's Rockstar 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved that you used angst in it, and how you made me feel depressed. I would suggest though to use more colors because I wish it would never end! So just more, more, more! Amazing! |
| Eadoin Flannery 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusei thought it was very beautiful. Captures a lot of emotion. |
| Tikklz 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really unique. I loved the approach of using the colors. It gave the poem much more visual appeal. The only one that doesn't seem to quite match up is green. Maybe tweak that a bit, see if you can come up with a clearer connection between the relationship and that color? |