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Reviews For: The Rose Thorn

Tutube
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseAh, a very interesting idea. I love the format of poetic story/narrative poem. It makes it quite hard to categorize it as a poem or fiction, but personally I would've submitted it under poetry. Very well writ!
friend 49
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseI really really really like this.

It's a very simple idea, but it's very well done.

I like the wording, too.

Personally, I like the second to last paragraph most. For some reason. It just... Grr I dunno.

Yeah. Sorry I'm not being a better critic. My brain is fried at the moment. :)
emiray
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was very good! I love the rhyming and the rhythm!
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