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| Tutube 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseAh, a very interesting idea. I love the format of poetic story/narrative poem. It makes it quite hard to categorize it as a poem or fiction, but personally I would've submitted it under poetry. Very well writ! |
| friend 49 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI really really really like this. It's a very simple idea, but it's very well done. I like the wording, too. Personally, I like the second to last paragraph most. For some reason. It just... Grr I dunno. Yeah. Sorry I'm not being a better critic. My brain is fried at the moment. :) |
| emiray 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was very good! I love the rhyming and the rhythm! |