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| czarina 2008-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it! somehow i can relate to it! being a child was good, being a adult was tiring i think we can all relate! good job! |
| perpetual questions 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuse"and ended with a child's voice begging for more." I'm not sure why, but this line seemed so poignant... We beg for more even after we have ceased to be children... Anyway, the whole poem is so beautiful. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseAh, adored this. Especially the beauty of the last stanza. So, so wonderful. I alo really love, "so I'll plead with the skies to reverse time." This is quite random but I really like that word "persona". Don't know why, I just really liked it. Odd. Anyway, wonderful job! |
| Daiysis 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseThis so sad and true. You haven't been writing as often and I think this to be a pretty good come-back. Bravo! |
| never-written 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseAh...perfection. It flows without a glitch. "Love muses in sweet lullabies" I love it. |
| A little birdie once told m... 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really good. For some reason, I like instantly related to it. Sometimes it takes me a couple of times reading a poem to understand it. This came so natural. Thanks for a good read. |