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| Basara 2007-10-06 ch 1,  | abusea bitter concept... nice... |
| life on rewind 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved the originality. Could almost be a song of sorts. Loved the meaning. Punctuation. It expresses places where you want the reader to pause and helps with flow and metre. If you dislike using punctuation, I respect that, but if you’re open to comments then maybe you should consider this one! Thank you for posting this! Maybe you wouldn’t mind checking out a few of my writings too if you feel like it and liked the review? If you do, I recommend my rants. I hope the concrit helped! Sakura. [Yes, I copy/paste most of my reviews. So sue me. The concrit changes per review, and you get tips, right? Win/win situation. End of.] |