I like it. Of course, so far I have liked all of your works. I think my favorite thing about your style is the straight jump in. I catch on quickly and get bored with long intros.
Alex

Wow.

That's pretty much all I can say, "wow," which is pretty amazing for me. But that's a good wow.

Keep writing, it's good!

Omg, super weird. MY name is Hayley, and I know this guy named Parker who used to do drugs. oO But he hates me X) But I have friends and I'd never cut myself. That's stupid thing to do. This Hayley and I don't have a lot in common. Rofl.

Lol, this is really intriguing though. You should update. :D

Kioasakka

I like where this is going, looking forward to another chapter. Good work

def. write more.
:D
it really good.