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bucketheadkt 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseDear GrannyP, Your story, Sweet Memories, has been nominated for Punk'd Award. Your nomination has been displayed on our site. Keep up the great writing! - Katie Judge, SKoW Awards skow.
The Cat Died Nobly 2008-06-16 ch 17,	abuseWow. This is...just, wow. I can easily see it as some sort of great indie movie, I gotta say. Quite possibly the biggest twist EVER. If you were going to edit this, I think the Twilight references are a bit unnecessary, too. At the same time though, they aren't. Like...the vampire concept is kinda cool, but the whole "Twilight saved my life" part seemed a bit weird. I almost felt like there was too much Twilight influence. Great story--don't you love it when dreams give you great story ideas? I was considering writing out one of my favorite dreams. As far as a sequel, I wouldn't be opposed to it, although I think it could take away from the shock of the twist. Great work, xoxo Sarah
mbcrazychick2011 2008-06-15 ch 17,	abuseit was a great story. when i realised that there was somthing wrong with lila i though that the story was going to become really bad and crapy... but somhow you actually managed to pull it off and i have to cangradulate you. im not too sure about the sequel though... i mean i dont now , but how can you milk more out of this...unless you kind of show us how lila is going after this and her boy troubles... anyhow goodluck and you are quite good
eliza-smiles 2008-06-09 ch 17,	abusethis was brilliant, i totally wasn't expecting the twist at the end... yea your right about the dreams and real life bit but apart form that i thought you did exceptionally well considering you said it was your fisrt story... well done...
everybodyloveschocolate 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThis sounds so great!
Lovemelol 2008-04-30 ch 17,	abuseI hope that u finish it i wouldnt mind wondering who she ends up with. Its so confuzing. Does she end up with the nice guy or the guy that is a jerk but likes her. Like who does she end up with i dont get it. Can u possibly let me know what the sequal is? PLEASE im so looking forward to it...
Lovemelol 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story i just wish that there was more to it. Like what happend to her after? I was so confuzed
Dracoliekje 2008-04-01 ch 17,	abuseI totally loved your story, it's amazing. And scary, especially that part with Mickey. Was it Mickey? I forgot. Aah, and his creepy smile. So... So, like, Delilah MacSomething is her real name, she didn't choose anything because of her maiden name and stuff, right? =') Man, the grand twist at the end... I was like: "She said who is Brian! Why did she say that?!" I liked Lila's character, by the way. ^^
Colie Rae 2008-03-31 ch 17,	abuseWell I must admit your story was captivating enough that I spent hours reading it rather than working on my paper due tomorrow. But it was probably worth it. The story did seem a bit odd to begin with--like the whole situation but I found myself completely immersed in it, not noticing how illogical it was. I was a bit confused at the end. The whole "who is brian?" thing really threw me for a twist. But then it took me a bit to figure out which pieces of the puzzle were reality and which weren't. Honestly, I can't believe you threw in a twist that huge and it worked so well for you. I kind of felt cheated though like I got so attached to the story--like Lila--and then I was like, wait, what? Overall I really liked it though. I don't think you should write any from Tiffany's POV or add anything to this story. It is already so twisted around and crazy that I don't think it needs anything else. Oh, the part I did not like was the part where Lila's hair was stuck in a cabinet. It just didn't seem logical. I mean, it was her world and all but that was still a little sketchy for me.
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 17,	abuseWow oh wow! I absolutely L O V E this story :) I am interested in fluff!! Please post a fluff chapter!! PLEASE :) I am interested in a sequel, but I will be perfectly honest that I'm not sure if I would like a prequel. I would give it a try, that's for sure! Awesome story. I love Sonny & Eric and how hard would that be to choose? Good luck Lila, even though you're a fictional character :) LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 13,	abuseHoly Sh*t! "Who's Brian?"?!!?!?!?!?! Okay, so far I've been following this story pretty well. I knew they weren't vampires, I predicted the Witness Protection Program, but I did NOT see this coming!! OMG!! I was just going to give up on this one and go to bed, but heck no! I'm totally reading on...!
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 11,	abuseIt's 11:26 PM and I just got home from babysitting. (BTW- I was only reading after the kid was asleep, I'm not a terrible person). I should be in bed, but NO, your totally addicting story made me boot my laptop back up! What if the Memphis Mafia DOES exist and YOU have to go into the WPP?? What would you change your name to? I would make mine: Katie Cullen :) OK, SO not original!
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 10,	abuseAgain, so sad :(
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 8,	abuseOkay, okay... I've read your disclaimer about this being "fiction" but I am pissed!! How dare that bastard Mickey press charges! And she really was arrested? I'm so mad!! Okay, great writing as always! I'm babysitting tonight and getting paid for reading your awesome story :)
Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-15 ch 6,	abuseSo SAD :( I don't normally read stories with "Tragedy" as a category, but you write so well!

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