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| Robynbird 2007-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseDang. Love the analogy. Great descriptive...ness... Good job! |
| painted.music 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abusekonban wa I don't even know where to begin. I love this. I love this. I love this. *adds to favs* ... *sigh* And I STILL don't know where to begin. I just know that this poem left me reeling. I love the different titles given to each other and the names YOU gave to "her," almost opposite of what "he" gave her. This poem was absolutely brilliant. :D Zaijen -Shan- |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, good poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| the walking wounded 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abusei have to say this is one of the most amazing things ive ever read here. very good job :] |
| A little birdie once told m... 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is REALLY good... But I'm not exactly sure what it pertains to in our lives right now. You'll have to explain it to me later. Either way its awesome. |
| burning in effigy 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseoh my effing gosh. where to begin? love the way you referenced greek mythology- twisted it for modern purposes "and I call it a photographed memory but he calls it dead/and I keep saying iloveoyou and he keeps saying justlookatme/But I call him "Love of my Life" and he calls me "Pandora"/Since apparently all I do is cause mayhem in his life" beautifulbeautifulbeautiful. the entire thing is quotable. |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. This amazes me. I don't really know what to say, so this review is one of those that isn't really any help at all. I loved the formatting and the bold and everything. Lovely. Falcon |
| life on rewind 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseLove the originality! Kudos to you ^_^ Your piece is brilliant, but the constant use of bold/italics or excessive spacing or brackets/commas spoils it and detracts from the poem. Your poem should emphasise itself, you shouldn’t need word to do it for you. Thank you for posting this! Maybe you wouldn’t mind checking out a few of my writings too if you feel like it and liked the review? If you do, I recommend my rants. I hope the concrit helped! Sakura. [Yes, I copy/paste most of my reviews. So sue me. The concrit changes per review, and you get tips, right? Win/win situation. End of.] |