Though I only managed to read just one chapter of this, it is very cute and funny.

Your character reminds me of one of my best friends. I love the conversation between the Kelsey and Natalie. It seems to be very realistic and absolutely funny.

I really want to read more so hopefully you'll get it published.

I only managed to read the first chapter (darn those plagiarisers!) but so far it's really funny and it sounds sweet.

I hope you do get published someday.

-Tetrys

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Aw so cute!1

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Hilarious =)

Aw. Your story was adorable! Very orginal, it was nice reading a story that was not a gazillion chapters long. Also kind of sad because I wanted to learn more about these characters! haha you can never win can you!
Anyways awesome story~ can't wait to read more of your stuff!
x reeka

I loved this story. I like how you can write a chapter story but it's not necessarily this big, huge, dramatic thing. Just a cute, sweet, simple story. It's rather freeing to see how something doesn't have to a long chapter story or a one-shot, it can fall somewhere in the middle. You've inspired me! I think I might try something along these lines.

Oh and "Hercules" cracks me up. Love him. Their banter is great, very witty.

aww fluffy cuteness...I can't believe I actually said that, but I think it works.

AHAHAHAHAHA!
That was the cutest thing I've read in a veryvery long timeXD and yes, Jake IS a moron but a completely adorable moronXD Amazing shortstory, I loved it!

That's it? aw! I wanna read more...it was so amusing! Good job!

Very cute, very entertaining, very clever, and very, very well-written. I loved this! You're a genius, you really are.

Pahaha, I loved this. So dang random as hell. Kinda like me and my best guy friend.
Very well written too.
Middi~

This is so random and cute. I love it. Found you from Myrika, this is very well written!

It was fresh and the characters were great! The fliers idea was the best!

Firstly, part 6 did not suck, it was hilarious!

I don't think I've laughed so hard in a while.

Thank you for sharing this, it was brilliant! :)