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| Drallimer 2008-08-03 ch 7,  | abuseAh! This is so quirky that I want to run around in a turkey suit tomorrow just to appease that lousy feeling of being outdone in a contest that only lives in my brain. I mean... really. IT'S NOT EVEN A CLICHE IDEA. Apartments do sound fun... Oh yeah and. Berkeley right? Pete's? Unless there's a Pete's on the East Coast. Anyways. Koo-dohs. C'est magnefique. And witty. And clever. And brilliant! Romance fics with lots of quippy dialogue and minimal drama are hard to find and much appreciated. |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-06-30 ch 7, | abuseaww, it's over? it was really good, anyhow. |
| jaded image 2008-06-22 ch 7, anon. | abuseHahah, that was ridiculously cute :) And Jake is so silly that it's endearing to the max. I love how boy-ish he is and the way the characters interact with each other. This was very well-written and light-hearted. I can't wait to read more of your works! |
| x.betweenthelines 2008-06-04 ch 7, | abusethis story made me smile. =) |
| Hecate's Diamon 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abuseOMG! LMAO! I didn't stop laughing the whold time i read this story. It was so hilarious I actually cried laughing so hard. Lol. But yes, you are indeed a tease. Do you ever continue stories after they get together? |
| xiia0moonlight 2008-05-28 ch 7, | abuseLOL! short and sweet^^ |
| cbprice25 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseCute. |
| Carina 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseI love this story! I re-read it every now and then. It's just one of those that make you grin and give life a happy feeling. You should look in to getting it published in a short story 'zine or something. I like that it's a light, no-drama-for-your-mama, story , but at the same time intelligent, creative, and non-citrus-y. I also love your Jordan Cross story (can't remember the title at the moment). You've definitely got talent. |
| Azure Rose 2008-05-12 ch 7, | abuseLol loved the ending! The last few words are especially funny ;D Keep up the good work :) |
| Cecilyatheart 2008-04-14 ch 2, | abuseI like this story. I'm a Poli Sci major and my fave coffee shop is Pete's! Are you spying on me?!? :) |
| Kat The Great 2008-04-13 ch 7, | abuseyour story has become my drug and all i can do about it is ask for more. please and thank you |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOh i just realised that the story has been completed. Hahaha, great story though! :) |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-11 ch 7, | abuseHi! Great story! Lol, I didn't want the ending to end. Haha Update soon! |
| Ocean's pebble 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuse"Jake! I don't need see that yet!" - the line you left out. This twas very very good and funny! Mucho me gusta. |
| always wandering 2008-04-03 ch 7, anon. | abuse(Haha, sorry too lazy to sign in lol) This is absolutely awesome! haha, Jake is so quirky, he stole all our hearts. xD The fliers was really creative (: Somehow Tobias still remains as my favourite character though ^^ I have a thing for sidekicks haha. Perhaps a spin off with Tobias and Natalie? =P Great job! |