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| Azure Rose 2008-05-12 ch 7,  | abuseLol loved the ending! The last few words are especially funny ;D Keep up the good work :) |
| Cecilyatheart 2008-04-14 ch 2, | abuseI like this story. I'm a Poli Sci major and my fave coffee shop is Pete's! Are you spying on me?!? :) |
| Kat The Great 2008-04-13 ch 7, | abuseyour story has become my drug and all i can do about it is ask for more. please and thank you |
| LeticiaLiebtTokioHotel 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOh i just realised that the story has been completed. Hahaha, great story though! :) |
| LeticiaLiebtTokioHotel 2008-04-11 ch 7, | abuseHi! Great story! Lol, I didn't want the ending to end. Haha Update soon! |
| Ocean's pebble 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuse"Jake! I don't need see that yet!" - the line you left out. This twas very very good and funny! Mucho me gusta. |
| always wandering 2008-04-03 ch 7, anon. | abuse(Haha, sorry too lazy to sign in lol) This is absolutely awesome! haha, Jake is so quirky, he stole all our hearts. xD The fliers was really creative (: Somehow Tobias still remains as my favourite character though ^^ I have a thing for sidekicks haha. Perhaps a spin off with Tobias and Natalie? =P Great job! |
| DSLuverGurl123 2008-03-30 ch 7, | abuseThis was cute. :) |
| Helena 2008-03-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseI LOVED THE ENDING. All the witty remarks made the story extremely enjoyable. Amazing (: |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 7, | abuseaaww THE LINES ARE ALL SO ADORABLE! really great one! Loved it! |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHHA!! HILARIIOUS!! |
| LovelyxXxDreams 2008-03-24 ch 7, | abuseIt was great!! I loved it! |
| EvilGumbal 2008-03-17 ch 7, | abuseWhy can't a guy bring me flyers *sigh* I really loved you story jake is so adorable and Tobias sound sweet :3 |
| RoseLife 2008-03-15 ch 7, | abuseSO CUUTE! haha loved the ending i kinda of liked Tobias ^^ aww but Jake was so cuute with the fliers and all! well done xD |
| Carina 2008-03-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseAh! Amazing! A work of pure...awesomeness! |