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| Beautiful Dream 2007-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseFascinating ending... it doesn't say exactly what it intends to make you think about Allon, but it leaves you to draw your own conclusions. I love the paragraph about Astrovans and hidden driveways, relating the metaphor to the topic. Muy bueno!! |