"I can’t pass for indifferent

When you say goodbye"

i can relate to a lot of what you write about and i like your style, you are an amazing writer.

the last 2 lines concluded this piece perfectly, welcome to my favourite author's list )

I was going to wait a little bit to review this but holy shit I can't. I think this is, possibly, one of the best (if not the best thing) you've ever written. It's a little different but it's great. You should be proud.