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| Halogen11 2008-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseWhat I find very consistent and very rich about your work is the imagery. Fascinating. I like the contrasts and other-worldly feeling I get from this poem. Very well done. Viva good writing. |
| Anya Mabell 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. I really loved the first line because of the contrasting images. =) |
| burning in effigy 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuselike the slightly contradicting lines "Dark fields of brilliance"- shows both the "light" and the "dark" fantastic ending! |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseHmm...not exactly sure what to make up on this, but the imagery is definitely great. The last line is an amazing way to end the haiku. So bleak yet so visual. Great job! -C.N |
| Kusje 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI'm not sure what to make of this, but I find it fascinating. Good job. |
| R-Vega-X 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuse"To welcome it's fade" is a brilliant line, and the end to a great haiku. |
| Tender Sugar 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite time of day against a beautiful backdrop, and you captured the reason why in so few syllables, great job. ~TS |
| Chameleon81 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseA very clear picture! Very nice. |