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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseI love the song. Poor girl. Great job! Have a terrific day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Ardie 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseintersting i find i was questioning what you were trying to do in the repeition in each verse a lil chopy i could not quite get the vibe of emotion i should have got try to put more feelings into the words on your paper let me feel you being broken and whitering make me understand your pain! |