I love the word snarled... that was perfect

I like the piece... all the questions you ask are great and it's really easy to relate to. The only thing is the line length was a but all over the place, but other than that really nice piece.

ola!

It's nice... very well written... though for me, it's rare to have a friend snap at me, I think it's really confusing... btw, I like your name Amethyst Asheryn...

write on!
-shattered teardrops

Very good! It flows well and rings true.

Ooh, very good, I like it a lot. No grammatical or spelling errors, which is good, and it's got a lot of emotion to it. Great job!
~Emma