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| Esquirella 2007-11-05 ch 3, | abuseDefinitely a new and inventive plot line. |
| Sychaeus 2007-11-01 ch 3, | abuseHohoho. Curioser and curioser. ;) Victor's family is definatley a bit of a shock. I like the reactions to it. It's hard to tell much about the characters themsleves- i guess because there hasn't been a lot of interaction yet. I'm hpoing that comes later- i'd like to see how they really react to each other when they have to communicate beyond sarcasm and bewilderment =) Anyhows- good chapter. I enjoyed it ^_^ And Gabby continuing as Alice despite the name correction is awesome. eugh. Sneeze attack. I blame any and all mispellings on trying to type whilst sneezing up my livers. *hides* -Sy |
| Sychaeus 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abuseAmazingness. This idea is really cool- well, so far =p Moremoremore! *pouts* I like Victor ^_^ eugh. I sound like an eight year old wanting sweets. *blinks* Yes. That will do nicely. Your story is... a fantale. Or a Caramel. And that, dearest, is high praise indeed. All stretchy in the middle. |
| Amerez 2007-10-04 ch 2, | abusehm...I like this. cool idea. |
| Lerene 2007-10-04 ch 2, | abuseWhen I said update soon I really didn't think you would in the same day. (:P) Not that I'm complaning. I really like this. I like the twist. very cool. I wonder what happen to Victor then? Guess I have to wait see. |
| Lerene 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. What going on? Update soon so I can figure it out. |