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Reviews For: Waltzing In The Kitchen

Esquirella
2007-11-05
ch 3,
abuseDefinitely a new and inventive plot line.
Sychaeus
2007-11-01
ch 3,
abuseHohoho.
Curioser and curioser. ;)
Victor's family is definatley a bit of a shock. I like the reactions to it.
It's hard to tell much about the characters themsleves- i guess because there hasn't been a lot of interaction yet. I'm hpoing that comes later- i'd like to see how they really react to each other when they have to communicate beyond sarcasm and bewilderment =)
Anyhows- good chapter. I enjoyed it ^_^
And Gabby continuing as Alice despite the name correction is awesome.
eugh. Sneeze attack. I blame any and all mispellings on trying to type whilst sneezing up my livers.
*hides*

-Sy
Sychaeus
2007-10-21
ch 2,
abuseAmazingness. This idea is really cool- well, so far =p Moremoremore! *pouts*
I like Victor ^_^
eugh. I sound like an eight year old wanting sweets.
*blinks*
Yes. That will do nicely. Your story is... a fantale. Or a Caramel. And that, dearest, is high praise indeed. All stretchy in the middle.
Amerez
2007-10-04
ch 2,
abusehm...I like this. cool idea.
Lerene
2007-10-04
ch 2,
abuseWhen I said update soon I really didn't think you would in the same day. (:P) Not that I'm complaning.

I really like this. I like the twist. very cool. I wonder what happen to Victor then? Guess I have to wait see.
Lerene
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseinteresting. What going on? Update soon so I can figure it out.
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