I like these two guys. Their personalities aren't the most pleasant, but they are both entertaining in their own way.

Haha, somehow I think our intrepid narrator is going to regret his decision. I like Sun-face. It was a really good description of her...succinct but not just the normal 'hair-and-eyes' that most people give. I got a very clear picture.

Don't worry about time between updates, at least you did update! Therefore, you are doing better than I am. Can't wait to read more.

(PS. Victor, I thought...too. Still think, but you can't know that.)

Dude, this story deserves a lot more notice than it seems to have gotten. I know it's been a while since you've updated, but I just wanted to let you know that I really liked it. The concept is interesting, the characters dynamic, and the writing flows and is well done. So yay! I don't know if you plan to continue, but I sure hope so!

Off to read your other stuff!

oh, dear me. this is nice. I can't wait to see what happens!

Definitely a new and inventive plot line.

Hohoho.
Curioser and curioser. ;)
Victor's family is definatley a bit of a shock. I like the reactions to it.
It's hard to tell much about the characters themsleves- i guess because there hasn't been a lot of interaction yet. I'm hpoing that comes later- i'd like to see how they really react to each other when they have to communicate beyond sarcasm and bewilderment =)
Anyhows- good chapter. I enjoyed it ^_^
And Gabby continuing as Alice despite the name correction is awesome.
eugh. Sneeze attack. I blame any and all mispellings on trying to type whilst sneezing up my livers.
*hides*

-Sy

Amazingness. This idea is really cool- well, so far =p Moremoremore! *pouts*
I like Victor ^_^
eugh. I sound like an eight year old wanting sweets.
*blinks*
Yes. That will do nicely. Your story is... a fantale. Or a Caramel. And that, dearest, is high praise indeed. All stretchy in the middle.

hm...I like this. cool idea.

When I said update soon I really didn't think you would in the same day. (:P) Not that I'm complaning.

I really like this. I like the twist. very cool. I wonder what happen to Victor then? Guess I have to wait see.

interesting. What going on? Update soon so I can figure it out.