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Needa S 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abuseI can relate. Awesome write. Thanks for your kind reviews. Keep writing and God Bless.
TylerB 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseThat's a very interesting subject that I ponder on quite a bit as well. I can relate all the way across the board on this. I don't know why I'm so insecure about certain things, there's no reason for me to be; and yet I still am. It's like a disease that can't be cured. Great thought provoking read!
Taltush/MeiMei 2007-10-08 ch 1,	abuseIf you hadn't repeated some lines and concepts too many times, this could have been a really good poem. However, the overuse of certain concepts coupled with grammar mistakes made this into something that needs work. Despite the fact that it is not a long poem, it kind of dragged on after a bit. The flow is very good (I almost didn't notice the rhymes, they blend in so well) and the rhythm is all right (except for places where there are mistakes - I noticed another reviewer pointed them out), but if you just edited it a bit, this could be so much more impressive and solid. Mostly, though, it's good.
Sexy vampirechick 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseYou're poem is good except there are a few grammatical errors.It pretty much sums up what your trying to portray. "This is puzzle..." You should take out the "is". "Why do wear" You might wanna insert a "we" in there.