Reviews for Tomorrow I'll Be Strong

Dragonwing725 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuseI like this one. While you talk about all these bad things: guilt, pain, sorrow, you also talk about finding hope. Hope, not that things will get better, but that you can handle them better. I like the messages you send.
life on rewind 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseWow! First things first, I really liked this piece and the emotion expressed in it. I think you did a marvellous job of portraying feelings and the writing all flowed nicely. However, I would set out one or two tips below: Your poetry doesn’t have to be so structured – it’s called “free verse” for a reason :P Be more bold with your line breaks, go crazy with metre! You don’t have to break after every clause. Make use of breaking off incomplete sentences. Not every line has to be a sentence broken off by a comma and a full stop. Let it flow! LOVED THE IDEA BEHIND IT. &faves
girl without wings 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very sad piece for me, because I have seen people to try to starve away imperfection. I hope you don’t suffer from that. Thanks for sharing this piece. Keep writing.