sounds good
chapter 2 please,

Hi! Sorry it took my so long to review...

Anyway, this story sounds very promising. I take it you live in Malibu? :D

Great story - I can't wait to see what happens. Please keep up the great work and update ASAP.

Very good beginning. It draws you in and leaves you wanting more. The characters seem likable with stories to tell. When's chapter 2?

~Cham