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Napris 2008-08-02 ch 1,	abuseLoved it. I ran out of adjectives and superlatives, sorry. The best I can do is tell you I really liked it. I think the first story I read of yours was To Be A Suitable Heroine. I'm not too sure, but I remember the way reading Counting Chickens seriously made a huge impact on me. Mimi was such a lovely girl ... :) My favorite stanza is the Wendy one. It's so pretty! Peter Pan love stories are all the rage, damn.
awww 2008-06-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou made me cry! especially the wendy stanza! the whole imagery of him as a lost boy and you his wendy. aw. let's stay in never-never-land!
Snowhite 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abusethis was beautiful.
proud2bus 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseWow... that was beautiful. I love the lullaby and the Wendy part especially. It's just so good. I can almost hear someone speaking the words out... it's that good. : D
awaiting.rain 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abusegod, i love this. i wish i was able to write something like this.
Wicked-Tales 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseAw! I love the wendy-girl part! Very romantic and almost a desperate vibe. It's amazing.
alice 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abusefavorite lines: and this pulsing red mass in my chest is wanting you. Darling, let's stay in Never-Never-Land For Ever-ever and You are a beautiful writer. =)
hopeless-flame 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abusehm. very interesting (rubs chin) very interesting.i like how i don't know where to begin or end. but at last i know the fleeting feeling of this poem (story?) ... or do i? =]
Lulu Jones 2007-11-11 ch 1,	abusewow, this is probably what everyone feels when they fall in love, you've just been lucky enough to know exactly how to word it. :) love it love it love it.
Kelly 2007-10-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, I'm not a fan of poetry, but I thought I'd give it a chance because I'm a big fan of yours (have been for a couple years now, actually). So even though I don't particularily like poetry, I really really liked this poem, and even if I did like poetry, I would still really really like this poem. It was just so graceful and romantic, plus I enjoyed some of your more subtle rhyming, like 'had' and 'Land' (whether on purpose or by accident, it doesn't matter). Although I am curious as to why there was the line, "...and i stare at your lips too often" in the preview, but not in the poem itself. I mean, it's no biggie or anything that it wasn't in there (it's a nice line though). I was just wondering. Now I'm wondering if perhaps I should give the rest of your poetry a look-see. Oh, and P.S: I'm pretty stingy with reviews; I only give them when I am thoroughly impressed. Just thought I'd let you know.
peewee potato 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI lovelovelove this. It sounds like you're taking all those thoughts in your mind and literally throwing them at a sheet of paper, and it's gorgeous because of that. '(baby at least I can talk heat transfer and life for hours)' That line is amazing. [: 'Darling, let’s stay in Never-Never-Land/For Ever-ever' It reminds me of a cheesy line from a song that you don't actually understand until you read the lyrics, but in a good way.
dancing snowflakes 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was wow. I have no words. I'm not a very romantic person, but this poem touched me. It has so much raw emotion and feeling and I love the run-on style of the lines. I could just imagine someone saying it, nervously, not wanting to be rejected but wanting to express their feelings... I don't know if that was the vibe, but htat's what I felt. I especially loved "I’ll lie tangent to the line of your waist And this science is not my forte but I could try" That was sweet, and real, and raw all at the same time. The boy you had in mind must be incredibly special. I'm very impressed. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now, so I'll probably be reviewing you again soon.
BeccaBoo14 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseLOVE. LOVE. LOVE.
VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abusewhy does your stuff always rock!? it's so amazing! xoxo and all that jazz Velvet
Chocolate Herrings 2007-10-08 ch 1,	abuseAll I have to say is: ** gorgeous.

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