Wow! Very touching write. I myself didn't lose anyone that infamous day.. but I'm sure this will mist over anyone's eye, regardless. Lovely use of metaphors, by the way. You're brilliant.

It's a nice tribute with inventive comparisons. Its not crystle clear to follow.

konban wa

This was absolutely beautiful and so, so forlorn. I loved it.

Zaijen
-Shan-

Awesome poem.

~Twilight Starr~

this is very powerful. great work. i really feel the emotion.

This is a great piece! I love the emotion and the point of view you took on this. I really like this a lot! Keep writing.

beautiful. every single line has wonderful meaning. there's something behind every word. there are so many lines that i love, that i won't put one in my review...cause i'd just quote the whole dang thing.

-Sunshine

Simply beautiful imagery.

~OceansAway

Favorite parts: "forgetting the speed of light is fast than the speed of dark" and "we're not afraid of the sky, anymore." I've read it over and over and every time I read it I love it even more.

Beautiful. Really nice work, great job!
~Emma

Your tribute is proof that the heart can use common words and turn them into incredible images of beauty, grief, and hope. Thank you for reminding us.

Catalan'

Among the shadow stained side walks and smoldering skylines, I have to say that some words here are so descriptively well chosen that this is a code book art in itself :) thank you for this wonderful piece of reading

Forgetting that speed of light is faster than the speed of dark. How true, how true =).

Thank you for your insight =)

Oh dear, I'm falling in love with your imagery and flow. the speed of light/dark line and the last three lines, gold. purely. i love it.

This is a beautiful tribute. I love some of the phrasing in this: "like a-bomb memories," "past tense photographs," "lives bending like light caught in invisible mirrors." Simply stunning. Gorgeous work. Keep writing! :)