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| Maximatum99 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThis makes a lot of sense and has solid points. True, everything here is perfectly possible for I have experienced it myself. I'm kidding. It's emotionally disturbing on a school bus. This was entertaining because you broke it down nicely. Good work |
| Soryn 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseLOL, I took the bus once in my school life and vowed to never go back on. If only you wrote this about ten years ago. I really needed it back then... Great job! I can't stop laughing!^^ |
| aprettywar 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseahh, the joys of public transportation. this is hilarious! great work :) |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abusexD Wow... I'm not allowed to experience the joys of riding a schoolbus D": Hilarious. xD |
| Fairyworld1217 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, all I have to say is wow. Super funny laughed the whole time.. not sure if that's what you're trying to get! But yeah hilarious beyond belief. What made you decide to write this?!? |