very open hearted poem and very relatable. there's nothing wrong with wanting to conform and wanting to fit it especially since nobody likes to be rejected and left alone. yet if you'd just accept yourself just as you are, then others will begin to see it and accept you unconditionally. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

This is interesting.

Loved the repetition of "this is stockholm's syndrome" x3

Punctuation. It expresses places where you want the reader to pause and helps with flow and metre. If you dislike using punctuation, I respect that, but if you’re open to comments then maybe you should consider this one!

Your poetry doesn’t have to be so structured – it’s called “free verse” for a reason :P Be more bold with your line breaks, go crazy with metre! You don’t have to break after every clause. Make use of breaking off incomplete sentences. Not every line has to be a sentence broken off by a comma and a full stop. Let it flow!

Maybe you could format the poem into stanzas and remove the double spacing? It's a bit long otherwise, and reading it gets tedious. To remove DS, open up the document and hit backspace+shift at the beginning of each line.

&loved the originality.