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| x3life 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuse"We went together home, because he has no parents or siblings and my damn parents are just never home. We’re actually sort of in the same road." that kinda doesnt make sense, like it does, you just kinda jump around on ideas and its not flowly... but overall... totally loved it!! =) |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseoh i loved it. he's very unshy when he has to be... i like that side of him. great job =] - pretty yuina |
| Jevanminx 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseSexy, that was so brilliantly and strangely sexy. JM |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseyay! good story! i still don't think ur a perv. i'm like that too. any who.. good story! |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseAww! Your oneshots are really cute! Good job. |
| Altlover172 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseYup! That's definitely the one I've read before.. It's really cute 8D. |
| ladygirl1324 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abusea little fast-paced and i didn't really get to know the characters, and didn't really get the feel of their relationship before suddenly it was a different one. i don't want u to take this in the wrong way or anything, because if this were, like, the turning-point chapter in a book it would be good. just not as a first chapter, u kno wut i mean? keep writing!:) |
| Shini Ikuto 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseAws |
| a girl named Charlotte 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuse@.@ aw...how cute! love it!...*adds story to alert list* |