"We went together home, because he has no parents or siblings and my damn parents are just never home. We’re actually sort of in the same road."

that kinda doesnt make sense, like it does, you just kinda jump around on ideas and its not flowly...

but overall... totally loved it! )

oh i loved it.

he's very unshy when he has to be... i like that side of him.

great job ]

- pretty yuina

Sexy, that was so brilliantly and strangely sexy.

JM

yay! good story! i still don't think ur a perv. i'm like that too. any who.. good story!

Aww!

Your oneshots are really cute!

Good job.

Yup! That's definitely the one I've read before.. It's really cute 8D.

a little fast-paced and i didn't really get to know the characters, and didn't really get the feel of their relationship before suddenly it was a different one. i don't want u to take this in the wrong way or anything, because if this were, like, the turning-point chapter in a book it would be good. just not as a first chapter, u kno wut i mean?

keep writing!:)

Aws

. aw...how cute!

love it!...*adds story to alert list*