how many people do we need in our convoluted web?

liked it, but it seemed very prosy near the end. The beginning was very much poetry, but got a bit confused when you changed from 'you' to 'him', like you were writing too someone one minute then for someone the next. didn't think you needed the swearing at the end, bought down a nice little rant about loosing a friend. Keep writing, but edit more.

Peaceout, Kenzie