Liking what you've done with the story so far, really kept me engaged, and you've managed to turn a cliched fic idea into something different!

Would be grateful if you could check out some of my stuff.

Sakina x

I like it. Good work. Although, Nathaniel and Eire need to have an intimite momement. lol XD

i love Arcade Fire! ...not as much as Muse, but still! cool story too! i like. Cheers! -Cydonia

Wow, the opening description and characterisation really set the scene here. Looking forwards to more!

Sakina x