apparently imagery is one of your strengths because you do well with it in this one too. I really enjoyed reading this poem (so much that i turned off my music to get the full effect). It's got a great message about courage and strength against all odds. please post more of your works!

Yay, you finally posted it!

You forgot to italicise the single lines.

Anyway, I love your poem, and so would you-know-who - there are so many language techniques you can pick up!

Nice work, Miss I-am-an-Elite-but-I-deny-it!