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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. The sad thing is that it can really happen. Kids these days. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| x.inseparable 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love all the way you describe her happiness and then the sudden anxiety that quickly settles around her. I hope she didn't die...she was just unconcious?! :) |
| Racoon 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abusekinda short, it was okay add a little more detail it could be better Racoon |