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| Frore 2007-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseAn interesting story. I like how you interspliced it with quotes of self acceptance, and I think you have presented a tale that many teenagers can relate to. Your style seems to be in the earliest stages of its development, and it will be fascinating to see how it progresses. I felt a bit like I was reading an essay instead of a story... But that might just be me. Keep writing! |