hmm i like this story.

i like it.

Nice chapter:-) Hope there will be more Ridge x Deacon moments next time^_^

I like the idea of this story. I hope you will continue sometimes...

"He likes me, however, and has *since* gotten over my habit of stealing his coffee on mornings when I’m less-than-enthused about the day."

I think that you need to lose the "since" there, because there is no specification of time from before... Or something like that. That sounded much more coherent in my head.

Anyway... Hope you continue this story some day. ^_^

“You have a brother,” Deacon told me, attempting to sidestep me and keep walking. / “Really?” I asked, “I never knew that. And all these years I thought I was an only child…”

Yes! I /love/ sarcasm! ^_^

"When Deacon put his *cark* in park and turned off the ignition, I practically jumped out of the car, leaving my draw-string bag on the floor in the front seat."

What the hell is a "cark"? lol.

Don't you just love "straight" guys who love making out with other guys? I know I do! Makes for more drama that way. lol. :D

Hey. I really like this story so far, you've created an interesting story line and well rounded characters, along with great potential for a shit load of drama. Overall, a GREAT story in the making. :D I understand that it's been over 7 months since you updated, but I was wondering if you planned to continue this story. I would really like to finish reading it if you're willing to finish writing it. I can't wait to read what happens next :)

ps. please...? :D :D

OK. So I reread it. Big deal. Anyways, it wouldn't let me review on the other chappie 'cause I've already done that, but now my opinion has changed... let them be together! They're so cute!
Lee

Why is he wasting his time on this dickhead? Deacon is totally screwing him over. Not literally, but come on, this guy is such a player!!
Sorry for my little rant there.
Great Job so far, can't wait for more!!
:K
Bloodfeeder

I'm so confused Yet intrested I-I... I just want to hug you.

Grr hugs of confusion. I can't wait til the next chapter.

So...wow. I really like this. Especially how it kind of starts in the middle of the action. I would love it if you continued this but would understand if you don't.

I hope you're planning to continue with this. It's very intriguing and a good start. I'd like to know more about the background of their relationship. How did it begin? What made Deacon, as resistant as he is, get involved with Ridge? I can make a guess as to who made the first move.. but I could be wrong!
I'd love more! The sooner, the better ;D

I like it so far and hope you continue!

hey.. nice story =) hope you continue it

What's going on? I must know!