Aw, I like Alex's nerdy self. This was pretty funny. My favorite part was at the beginning when Lianthe mentioned the makeover and Max said, "That's all?" before freaking out!

This was great. Though, I'm kind of missing Bio and Marley. The narrator's awesome. Probably cause I'm a nerd and kind of think like him, for example, when he was thinking about Penbrooke's (That's his name, right?) frown. But, now I'm kind of curious about Callia, Penbrooke and Tyler.

I'm pulled in already =P update ssometime!~

What kind of weirdo school takes such an interest in this kind of school politics?

Update soon!

Wow...nice character development so far. Lianthe's definitely a character (no pun intended, heh)...her immediate nicknames, how she plays with people rather carelessly (not in a bad way)...it's all well done. Max's seeming indifference to the whole thing, like it's just something to put up with, goes really well too...same with Alexander's terror at dealing with new people. The stereotype is well fulfilled, and the inherent terror at dealing with new people - a trait lots of people, not just 'nerds', have - is marvelously all-consuming. Well done.

Happy writing!
-Arej