|Reviews for the colors of the rainbow|
| katie killjoy 4/14/08 . chapter 1
i really liked the color associations
especially, green with envy
ending didn't quite match up
but otherwise a really good poem
i likes it
| Outlaw's Serenade 11/10/07 . chapter 1
For a whole load of reason, that 'lithp' made me me did a doubletake and actually lol-ed.
| Twilight Starr 10/5/07 . chapter 1
I liked it.
Good luck with poetry and life.
Have a terrific day. :)
| burning in effigy 10/5/07 . chapter 1
interesting use of colors
i like how it starts off simple- everyday life.. and slowly drifts into the last few stanzas; my favorite has to be the last one, but i don't really like the capitalized letters since they sort of detract from the poem... i also don't really feel the word "cos" fits spelling wise. maybe " 'cause?"
ech it's your poem and up to you
but overall, i really liked it :)