i really liked the color associations

especially, green with envy

very nice

ending didn't quite match up

but otherwise a really good poem

i likes it

a lot

For a whole load of reason, that 'lithp' made me me did a doubletake and actually lol-ed.

Interesting poem.

I liked it.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a terrific day. :)

Twilight Starr

interesting use of colors

i like how it starts off simple- everyday life.. and slowly drifts into the last few stanzas; my favorite has to be the last one, but i don't really like the capitalized letters since they sort of detract from the poem... i also don't really feel the word "cos" fits spelling wise. maybe " 'cause?"

ech it's your poem and up to you

but overall, i really liked it :)