the whole poem feels so calm and flows so gently
and the words hit hard, i love it.

your poem is what i feel..and that's a funny thing

The essence of this peace is stunning; personal; metaphorical. Beautifully fabricated with the best of words. Truly amazing, keep it up.

Most days I feel like a virgin in a stripper joint, down on the east side of the city
Just surrounded by people looking for a good way to ** you over
and is it so bad that my eyes haven't smiled for a few months



perfection.


Always,
Stephen

Nice poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a terrific day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

This is so sad. The last line, horribly blatant and powerful. I loved the references you made with this. Wonderful job.

And thanks for the review. It makes me happy inside.

you blow my mind.

i'm in love with your references.
and i'm jealous at how well you incorporate them into your poems.
(green with envy)

wonderful poem :)