 Princess Dargon 2007-10-06 . chapter 1Wow, this is not a poem to be read only once or even twice. I think I read it three times and I am still trying to figure out exactly what it all mean(and I pride myself on being able to figure out poems). So, I'll be reading it again and again. I don't have much to critisize, but I try to make my reviews helpful... So, it is a little hard to see the deeper and deepest meanings. There is the top layer and strong feeling of hoplessness/depression, but as I continue to read it I keep getting the feeling there is something more. I don't know if you did that on purpose but it is feedback non-the less. Thank you for posting it! |