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| helixdown 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWell i must say this has helped me alotand though i've probably already screwed up hundreds of action scenes, at least now i can get them right! Thanks. |
| Fractured Illusion 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, thanks for this handy guide! :D Action writing is really NOT my forte so this is really helpful. Particularly where you actually show how you write a good action scene. :) Sorry for the sucky review. I dont really have much to say other than THANK YOU! - Frac |
| Casey Drake 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseNot only was that sentence painful, it had atrocious grammar. XD I think I've seen this before in its previous incarnation but I still enjoy it and intend to use it. :) CD |
| Discipulus 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI can typically go several pages with good description, character development and interaction. I can describe the vastness of mountains and the intricate details of a character's expression... My problem? Combat! I love combat so very much but I have trouble writing it... Thank you my young friend for this quick guide, I do greatly appreciate it. |
| Mantar 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusevery well written, and very helpful. I will absolutely learn from this! |