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| Sylvia Woolf 2007-10-07 ch 1,  | abuseJesus. It's excellent, but it's like a bucket of cold water of the head: harsh, in your face and intense. I'm going to have to read it later when I'm more awake. |
| crimsonscars 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusewrite more =] |
| Core Satiated 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseNice work! This feels like it comes from a very personal place. I especially loved the last paragraph, which sums up the inability to confront, whether it's vulnerability or lack of courage, or just the simple desire to keep status quo. It really does hit home...which as a writer, it's exactly what you want. |