"But lastly," Nathan said, sitting up. "Lastly, it made me realize how much I love you."

That's just so sweet!

You have a talent for making sweet and adorable stories like this! Good job! :)

aw so cute and sweet.

love the word love! haha.

he's so sweet!

Wow!That was a nice little confession out there...

Aw...so touching. ) He's a cutie.

Naaw! Why didn't you tell me you had this here? I seriously need to put you on my author alert list. Very cute :)

Well since you've been reviewing my story, I thought I'd read something of yours, and picked a one-shot since I don't have much time to read right now.

And this is so adorable! I loved his little speech near the end. And I love the name Nathan. XD

Thanks for reviewing!

this is GREAT! and actually you didn't misspell "realise". "Realise" is British spelling. "Realize" is American spelling. So you are not wrong. :D

this is good

Aw! It was really cute! I loved it!

hehe

i loved it ]

its really cutee

Brilliant :-)

hey good work ]

haha i read one of your reviews.. and it said you misspelled realised... what a silly person! everyone knows realised is the normal way to spell it, its just that americans aren't normal... lol

no offence to any americans reading this but, you really need to catch up on other peoples lingo - i mean, we do pretty well with yours!

anyways, this is def going to go in my favourites. but dont continue it! its lovely the way it is ]

x

Awe, that was cute!

I just don't think it should be a one shot, I think it should continue, it could be very interesting as long as it didn't turn into a cliche.