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| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseIf I hadn't read the summary, I would still have guessed almost those exact same words. I love the imagery you've created, and how relatable it is to any book lover-- it's the same cozy phenomenon as Cornelia Funke's "Inkheart", how you understand exactly how the character feels because it's how you feel all the time. I seem to have many issues with single words today. In this case, I don't like the presence of the word "she" in the second line-- because who else would you be describing? It seems bulky, and the phrase would work just as well as an absolute. --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
| heart'n'soul-of-ink 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusewonderful. I love it. |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. I totally agree... i love books |
| Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI think this has more of a tranqil tone to it and I think it is also very relazing and soothing xD Well done! |
| luv me like no other 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. i would love to be in that situation. this is so cute! |
| sirius chatham 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusethis piece is actually pretty good. i get a very warm and content image of the girl lying surrounded by books (which is simply the best way to be, in all honesty). I recommend you check out a book called Too Loud a Solitude, by Bohumil Hrabal. Fantastic book; your poem really reminded me of it. cheers, sirius chatham |
| chibichoco 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Very nice. Sounds alot like someone I know. Yeah XD |
| RandoMaia 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseNot much to criticize here. Sweet little poem, love the sentiment. ^^ |