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| Midnights Scream 2008-07-16 ch 15,  | abusewow. he's pretty far gone. poor guy so addicted to drugs he doesn't know what to do anymore |
| Midnights Scream 2008-07-15 ch 9, | abusewow. Seji is a little dense at time. I'm surprise he survived so long and hasn't been caught. great job! |
| Midnights Scream 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abusewow. poor kid being caught in the crossfire of everyone's mess. |
| pandasXrobots 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abuseoh yes!! im so glad he took him up on his offer! jyeshh! LOVED IT STILL AHAHA!! |
| pandasXrobots 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuse*gasp* the father had an affair...with his son! oh man oh man.. i really liked this ahhaha now i need to keep reading! |
| >ls 2008-04-27 ch 22, anon. | abuseahh. that was a awesome story, |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 22, | abuseThis was really good! I loved the way you wrapped it all up. I'm so glad he's all happified now. I'm excited to read the sequel to this one, but I think I'll do that tomorrow. I spent my whole day reading all of this. XD Well anyways, good job! See you around. ^_^ ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 21, | abuseaw... it's almost over! epilogue, here i come! ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 20, | abusethis was a really good chapter! i don't really have a super lot to say this time so... keep up the good work! ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 19, | abusegood chapter, and once again i must say that i love Liam. he's awesome. i'm glad things are started to look up for Seiji! and i just realized that he's supposed to be in school with this chapter. LOL school is icky. haha. anyways, keep up the good work! ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 18, | abuseLOL the new character is pretty awesome. "So, I begin my long a perilous journey through the seedy area of town where I know prostitutes, disease, drugs, molesters, killers, rapists, rabid dogs, evil hobos, and extremely illiterate people reside." That's good... just so good. XD and the whole "ZOMBIE, ZOMBIE, ZOMBIE" LOL yeah, I love him. well, keep up the good work! ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 16, | abuseLOL crazy crack head XD great chapter. ::wonders what will happen next:: ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 15, | abusedid i mention last time how amazing your writing style is? it really is. your use of bolds and italics are just really great. it makes the story more interesting and easy to read. keep up the good work! ~ Mogi |
| Rinkika 2008-04-26 ch 14, | abuseyou were the one who wrote Car Ride!?! i've been thinking since i started reading this earlier today that it was like a sequel to that!! it makes so much sense now. but anyways, time for the actual review: I LOVE THIS! seriously, you're a great writer. i apologize for not reviewing sooner, but i was thinking "oh it's stupid to review for a chapter that already has 15+ chapters after it." but now, i'm doing it anyways. thanks so much for finishing this and updating so much. you really are great. you're good with character development as well. i'm excited to keep reading, and theres a sequel to this one too, isn't there? thats awesome! keep up the good work!! ~ Mogi |
| maggiepyro101 2008-01-20 ch 22, | abusecute ^^ lucky for me i did read car ride first so i knew what was going on. i was reallt good, every now and then you mised a word in a sentence but i figured it out. |