Beautiful.
Plain and simple.
I can't think of a better word to describe how you write.
I adore it.

a beautiful piece of poetry that captures so many feeling sin such little words. avaricious! fantastic word choice! amazing, amazing poem! i love it!

Creating a Dream

wonderful yet again! and yet, i managed to find one small mistake: you used the wrong form of "new". you should have used "knew instead. anyway, again, the imagery is intense! beautiful sense of emotions. need... more... little... stories!!

Creating a Dream

"the creation of untamed armour" is a beautiful phrase! what a wonderfully descriptive story. so lovely and passionate and beautiful. onward to reading the other two!!

Creating a Dream

holy guacamole that was intense! so short, and so perfect! a beautiful mix of emotions you have going on there! can't wait to read more!

happy holidays!

Creating a Dream

A long awaited love. I liked the intricate detail, you spared the reader nothing, showing us everything with your words.

I like this, a love that you both want and could do without, all at the same time. It's like the rush of emotions one feels when denying that they're in love.

Wow! It has such a powerful hidden meaning.

These are really good! They're really short, though. I wish you would write some pieces that were longer so that I could spend more time reading them. All of these pieces seem like they would be great parts of maybe a romance short story...

Anyway, great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!