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| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was wierd for me to read because I am the blonde haired blue eyes girl who is loud and easily laughs. I still get silver. But I know how you feel. Jealousy is a... well a not nice word. =] I like this style of poetry. |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusethis was beautiful and creative. good work here. i've felt this way before; i think we all have...i honestly, prefer silver though. the kind of gold that i like is white gold. that's pretty. haha. not that that has anything to do with this. but again, good job. keep writing. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseomg, this is amazing! It stikes a chord with me, because I've felt this way before. Simply fantastic. Keep up the good work! Faith |
| fairytale failure 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love this! It is oh-so-relateable but still seems personal. Your description of this girl was beautiful and had poignant feelings especially of jealousy. My favourite line was 'I am the supporting actor in our play of hearts and that girl you barely know plays the lead.' I know the metaphor has been used before but you wrote it out so beautifully. The ending was great too, shedding some light and hope on the rest of the poem. |