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Liviania
2008-05-16
ch 12,
abuseI love the Smiths!

Whoa. Hammered person equals very bad idea. Hammers go with nails, not screws.

Livi
Midnights Scream
2008-05-16
ch 12,
abuse*Snicker* poor guy, but it's fun! Mike is drunk and horny apparently. It's great!lol. great job!
Narcotic Affliction
2008-05-16
ch 12,
abuseOmg, the ending was so hilarious!
It was like package rape!
[[Exvept you know, willing]]
I loved it!
How abut next time,
You make one of them
Naked?
C'mon, you know,
You want to!
renru-no-ren
2008-05-16
ch 12,
abuseOMFGWTFBBQLOLOMFGOMFG!

updates?
ChibKo
2008-05-15
ch 12, anon.
abuse*grin* I don't think I've reviewed before.. but I love this story, and the end of this chapter takes the cake~ "Mike" being drunk in a pub.. how curious. I smell some secrets... But yeah. Nick, I have a funny feeling something is going to go wrong for you. Yet.. I still hope something goes right! *laughs*

A little glossary would be wonderful... because I honestly can only figure out a few of the terms used by Nick.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. This story is so awesome. Makes me feel giddy and giggly, like a kid again.
A Scarred Soul
2008-05-15
ch 12,
abuseOh god! I don't know what to say . . . . Oh god! (Does that sufficiently express my speechlessness . . . no) So, one more time now - oh god!
Grief, I can't believe Mike, so strange calling him that, did that! And went to the bar to get drunk rather than work! And there is a lot of fishy stuff going on here - so I can't wait for you to update again! EK!
chameleonduality
2008-05-15
ch 12, anon.
abuseOh man, that chapter was hilarious. It's so good to see a British story! They're all usually American, and the school system confuses the hell outta me! (I'm from Northern Ireland). I think I've been a bit of a silent lurker for most of this story, reading but not reviewing. So I thought I'd say; wonderfu story! Keep it coming!

^.^ Peace.
Vengeful Black Dreamz
2008-05-15
ch 12,
abuse*GRIN*

Brilliant chapter!
Ty Taco
2008-05-15
ch 12,
abuse:]
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Does he mean wrong...or TOTALLY RIGHT!?
lol

I fudging love this chapter.
And I hate you for making me start using the word fudging instead of **.
But oh well.

I LOVE this story.
I LOVE these characters.
I LOVE this Mr. Roberts...I mean Mike plotline.

xoxoxo,
Ty
Feel The Waltz
2008-05-15
ch 12,
abuseAhahahaha, this chapter didn't half make me laugh. Spesh that bit about the chavvy trainers. Update vair quickly please as i am eager to see what happens next :D
Kilian
2008-05-15
ch 12,
abuseIt can only go wrong if they can get home. But seeing as things are, by that time Mr Robert-call-me-Mike will either have sobered a little or fallen in a coma… or Nick's head will have exploded.
Pundit
2008-05-14
ch 12,
abuseWow, subtlety's not Drunk Mike's thing, huh? That was hot though (in a dirty way that I don't really like admitting). I wonder why he got plastered (and dressed up). Maybe he was sacked? There better be some more action in the next chapter. It will kill me if Mike passes out before anything more substantial can happen.

Love it! Update soon!
Kenya Bloodstone
2008-05-14
ch 11,
abuseOMFG this chapter was brilliant. I love this story. I am going to read the next chapter probably in the morning though seeing as it is already after 1 am my time. much love and hugs to you kudos
Catseye*Rose
2008-05-14
ch 12,
abuseEe, I was so excited to see this updated so soon! ^^ Oh my! You weren't kidding! So, uh, what got Mike so wasted? I'm gonna take a stab and say it was because of his crushing on Nick. Which is totally cute XD Heh. Oh, Dougie...that poor kid. Ah, things are getting crazy!! Hm, a glossary, eh? I think the only thing right now I don't understand is how the Years in school work...in Canada, we have Grades 1-12, then uni (and in Grade 12 you're 17-18). How is it set up there?
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! I'm figuring it's going to be mad crazy and exciting! XD
CakeForEveryone
2008-05-14
ch 12,
abuseMuch better! You totally made up for the last chapter!

Tsk what is Mr. Mike doing to "poor helpless defenseless" nick? I adore this chapter and I cannr wait to see where this goes!
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