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| nightslight 2007-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the way you rhymed everything. There was this flow which kept me reading. The emotion is very well laid out also. "I wonder why everything has changed and I wonder why your feelings for me rearranged." Thats my favorite line. |
| chibichoco 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really nice. Liked it alot. Yeah XD |