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Reviews For: Time Will Stand Still

Twilight Starr
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseImaginative poem. It made me laugh. ^^

~Twilight Starr~
Guardrail
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really interesting poem. I can't say I've ever read anything quite like it. I mean it all in a good way though, of course. I really like your unique choice of imagery. Great work, I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!
xEmoMuffinx
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseThis caught my attention at first, while I was deciding to return a review, because it had no reviews! :O

Indeed, it is very imaginative and follows pretty much the same pattern. One thing though...

"Into a steam engines pipe"

There should be an apostrophe in the word "engine". Perhaps that's just a typo, but the error's still there. It's an interesting poem overall.
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