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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseImaginative poem. It made me laugh. ^^ ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Guardrail 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting poem. I can't say I've ever read anything quite like it. I mean it all in a good way though, of course. I really like your unique choice of imagery. Great work, I really enjoyed this. Keep writing! |
| xEmoMuffinx 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseThis caught my attention at first, while I was deciding to return a review, because it had no reviews! :O Indeed, it is very imaginative and follows pretty much the same pattern. One thing though... "Into a steam engines pipe" There should be an apostrophe in the word "engine". Perhaps that's just a typo, but the error's still there. It's an interesting poem overall. |