I really liked the second chapter, you do a lot of detail and I can't wait to read more! I'm so curious about this oy and the man and all of the magical-ness of the place! Hope you upload more!

Hey, I really like this!! Sorry I'm not really good at reviewing, but I would like to read more! I didn't see many grammar mistakes, good job! Hehehe, hope to read more soon!

Wow this is so different from the other stories and it's really good!