 kloun mannequin 2007-10-19 . chapter 9that's a sweet end, I don't know why but to me the chapter more interesting is escape, everything was gripping. |
 ShadowJHunter 2007-10-17 . chapter 9The end.
I found this story pretty interesting, thoughout. I don't really get the ending, though. Is the guy actually Death, or was it his aftershave all along? Gah XD
Great story, anyway :) |
 miragecat123 2007-10-13 . chapter 5Wow! You have some real talent! |
 ShadowJHunter 2007-10-13 . chapter 5I've just finished reading, and wow, this is a great story. It reminds me of a movie short, and that's not a bad thing. I love the idea of having the different perspectives in different time eras. You've done a great job of capturing one's imagination, even though the chapters aren't that long.
Keep writing. I look forward to reading more, and uncovering the mystery behind 'the poision man' very soon. |
 kloun mannequin 2007-10-12 . chapter 4the mystery in this caught my attention, "a proposal" was a good start, I really love mystery stories, so I hope you update soon. |
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