that's a sweet end, I don't know why but to me the chapter more interesting is escape, everything was gripping.

The end.

I found this story pretty interesting, thoughout. I don't really get the ending, though. Is the guy actually Death, or was it his aftershave all along? Gah XD

Great story, anyway :)

Wow! You have some real talent!

I've just finished reading, and wow, this is a great story. It reminds me of a movie short, and that's not a bad thing. I love the idea of having the different perspectives in different time eras. You've done a great job of capturing one's imagination, even though the chapters aren't that long.

Keep writing. I look forward to reading more, and uncovering the mystery behind 'the poision man' very soon.

the mystery in this caught my attention, "a proposal" was a good start, I really love mystery stories, so I hope you update soon.