almost perfect.

Oh wow, i really liked the way you did this and how you showed the confusing emotions- I really related.

That was beautiful.

Great imagery!

This was awesome. I enjoy the love/hate/love Snatch gives to Brian. Doesn't want to/can't help it.

Very nice. Your characterization of the boys was pretty amazing considering the length of this ficlet. Your tone was great and so was the end.

Thanks. Keep writing.