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| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 7,  | abuseSo few words hold so much powerful emotion. Amazing. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 6, | abuseI like all of it. But I adore those last two lines. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 5, | abuseI love what you did with holl(ow)ywood. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 4, | abuseSometimes it's hard not to be mocking when something seems so futile. Yet it's really quite sad... Another great "Dead Cliché. (Though I really don't find them very cliché.) |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 3, | abuseI really like this one, the descriptions of those things mentioned. The last line is the perfect end to the other three. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 2, | abuseHow DOES one? ...I wish there were a good way. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseSchool + life is the perfect combination to make one want to scream... At least those things together do that to me. I love the simple intensity here. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 7, | abuseHow is it so few words can be so sad? Yet it's the truth, plastered on the edges of our lives and our own thoughts. We are all just so selfish. Ugh. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 6, | abuseAh, the love affair between a girl and her notebook. Beautiful. I'm right there with you. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 5, | abuseHollowood. How absolutely true. So many things in our society are so shallow and fake. I don't even desire fame. Good poem. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 4, | abuseWhere do the dying get salvation? I love your subliminal message(s). |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 3, | abuseI really, really like this one. It is like a mirror of the world. It's amazing how much you can say with such few words. Great job. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 2, | abuseThat is a good question. I really couldn't tell you, though I can relate. Good job. |
| Ashelin 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked the surreal versed real imagery in this one. Ah, a collection of poems! I'm always afraid if I do something like this it will never get reviewed. You are truly brave. ;] |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-08 ch 4, | abuseThat's why you're supposed to laugh inside your head. Joking. Anyway, great poems. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |