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| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-06-26 ch 15,  | abusehiya another great story - loved the ending. Can't wait for the sequel. I love your writing style. Angel |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-15 ch 15, | abuseA few times I wanted to punch Rob in the face but I'm glad how you worked things out. The only thing that bothered me was how he just seemed to know what was bothering him and yet.. didn't know. It seemed a bit odd to me. But it was still an awesome story. :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThey're finally married! Rene seems to get bitchier and bitchier in this story... |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-04-04 ch 15, | abusecute. at least they finally figured it out. yay! |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-30 ch 15, | abuselovin` it (; |
| theslykit 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusewow great story!! i love all of your stories!! :D |
| Lady Knight 1512 2008-01-27 ch 15, | abuseThat was great. Rob was such an **. I didn't expect it. It was so ... unlike him, but i understand why he'd be link that. He was upset about his dad, and there was the stress from work, and Sidney was pregnant. You know, i was surprised, when they had Abby first. The impression i got from 'Phone Calls' was that Robby was older. Oh well. Rene was a little irritating, but i guess she was supposed to be, huh? Max was great though, and i was a little disappointed that we didn't get to see more of him. Stupid Rob. Hmph. This was a great story, but i think i enjoyed the first one more, though not for any particular reason. It was just that the plot of that one intrigued me more than this one. I'll get to reading your other stuff too, though maybe not til tomorrow. As usual, i can't wait! ~LK1512~ |
| tanya2byour21 2008-01-12 ch 15, | abuseI loved it and so can't wait to read your next story. I can't wait to read Robby's story. Is there a chance you are going to write a story about Abby also. I know you have a lot so stories on your place and I don't want to add more. I was just wondering. Tanya |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-10-29 ch 15, | abusewow, a bit short, but still awsome. cool yea? what about connors story eh? cya to ur writing! samantha |
| Winter Spring Romance 2007-10-26 ch 15, | abuseawesome sequel! I lov ur other stories too! |
| laprincesadelasuisa 2007-10-25 ch 15, | abuseSo the last five chapters were great. I am looking forward to this new story. |
| miss-life 2007-10-22 ch 15, | abuseAw! Now that was a good ending! I was waiting when Rob will stop being so grumpy!! gotta go to sleep GREAT STORY! __Tina__ |
| chevy-luv 2007-10-22 ch 15, | abuserob's back being not dumb :) (if that made sense lol) its sad that this over byt please keep writing :) |
| midnightbeauty 2007-10-20 ch 15, | abuse:) I liked this ending. It fit. And it tied up the issues and conflicts nicely. I'm kind of sad the story's over, and I'll miss reading it, but for once I'm not dissapointed about the ending. It was actually good. :) Thanks for finishing it. Loved the story!! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| lori 2007-10-20 ch 15, anon. | abuseHi again, I hope i didn't offend you with my last review. I honestly think you're a talented writer and your stories are very enjoyable ( i wouldn't be here otherwise) so please don't be offended. I just though about how unrealistic certain aspects seemed, but if you're more concerned about what works for the story than i must say a glimpse at her past is very interesting. |