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| surrealphobia 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just... Wow. I really enjoyed how this poem transformed, and I wasn't expecting it at all. (I don't really know what I was expecting though) Regardless, I loved this poem and how your words flowed together, the angel can be interpeted so many different ways and yet is still so beautiful. Great poem. Surreal |
| Laura Schiller 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this is really beautiful! It's only the first sentence that seems kind of awkward, but I love the imagery and how there's hope at the end. |
| Tatiana Moore 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful... I really liked this. I can visualize it in my head which I think is amazing. Great job! |
| criti-sized 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very beautiful poem. I really love the words you used in it to express the imagery of it. The lines in it as well were very well crafted and told a great story. I agree with your first reviewer that this was amazing. C.S. |
| Hunter Victoria 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness. This was amazing. =D |