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Reviews For: Crestfallen Angel

surrealphobia
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseWow.

Just... Wow. I really enjoyed how this poem transformed, and I wasn't expecting it at all. (I don't really know what I was expecting though) Regardless, I loved this poem and how your words flowed together, the angel can be interpeted so many different ways and yet is still so beautiful. Great poem.

Surreal
Laura Schiller
2007-10-12
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, this is really beautiful! It's only the first sentence that seems kind of awkward, but I love the imagery and how there's hope at the end.
Tatiana Moore
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseVery beautiful... I really liked this. I can visualize it in my head which I think is amazing. Great job!
criti-sized
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very beautiful poem. I really love the words you used in it to express the imagery of it. The lines in it as well were very well crafted and told a great story.

I agree with your first reviewer that this was amazing.

C.S.
Hunter Victoria
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseOh my goodness. This was amazing. =D
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