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Reviews For: It Never, Ever, Goes Away

simpleplan13
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseinteresting... the whole monkey thing is unique and could be a metaphor for a couple things or just a silly piece.. either way its great
sylvia's syndrome
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseI think you’ve really gone above and beyond when it came to developing the main metaphor here. In a way it’s admirable, but at times it felt like you were stretching it a little too far, so I thought it was also a bit distracting. Nice work overall! Keep up the good work!
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