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| simpleplan13 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... the whole monkey thing is unique and could be a metaphor for a couple things or just a silly piece.. either way its great |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI think you’ve really gone above and beyond when it came to developing the main metaphor here. In a way it’s admirable, but at times it felt like you were stretching it a little too far, so I thought it was also a bit distracting. Nice work overall! Keep up the good work! |